Bullet Points

I think that I need to expand on my current story outline. I am currently on the third bullet point, and I am only on page 13. I seem to be flying through the story much faster than I should be. Of course these first points are short items compared to points later on in the story. They are just to introduce the main characters, set the scenes etc.

As a note to self (so I can add this when I have access to my documents):

- On the morning of the trip to the plateau, take that from Gaven's point of view, so we can see his flat etc. (gear shaped, cylinder apt. building. he has a loft above his bedroom, a kitchen and bathroom, front door opens into his living room)

- Enroute to the plateau, discuss Naeva's past etc. Father who never noticed her, cept when she got PERFECT marks etc.

- At the plateau, they find the water bubbling etc. Under the plateau is a HUGE cavern of water, like bubbling up (may need to research this). They need to send this data back to the lab, poss speak with someone there (may need some additional character profiles)


Other points will be expanded upon later.